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Post Tue Feb 14, 2012 8:28 pm

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*Once he removed everything but his pants he looked down at the red pool. The blood of ancient Sith? He gazed at it in wonder, he listened to him repeat the code and the code of the brotherhood while he continued to look at the pool.*


*He had almost said these words to himself like another voice in his head repeating it to him after every word every second.*

*He looked at Talon and finally he was at the edge of the red pool when he looked back inside at his reflection in the red liquid.* I will leave my life behind, i will look to the future and embrace the darkside.
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Post Wed Feb 15, 2012 2:05 pm

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*talon came up behind him as he whispered in his ear*

"now die, and be reborn"
*in a quick movement he stabbed Jak in the back below the ribcage with his knife. As he pushed him into the pool. the blood would heal the wound but he must fight to live, and then arise a new man. the blood was special, it affected everyone differently.Talon remembered seeing his mother and father and the thousands of jedi he would slay in their name, as his mother had been the one to stab him, except she had done it not so nicely, it made him who he was. he remembered drifting in the blood hearing whispers, of all of the sith who had given there blood to this pool, as well as all of the victims. He smiled. the faint scar below his heart was a friendly reminder. He cut his hand allowing his blood to spill as he said*

"lose thyself, to find thyself,
let go of all that has brought you here
be reborn in the darkness
be reborn in the flame"
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Post Thu Feb 16, 2012 8:47 pm

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*It was at the moment which he had seen his reflection in the pool of blood that it distorted by the spilling of his own blood dripping down into it. He gave a gasp before he fell into the blood, turning as held his hand over the wound. As he fell back into it his blood flowed from his very body into the pool of others that have given themselves to the darkness. He couldn't see anything because it was the darkness taking over his mind, he felt like he was sinking.

The wound pulsed with pain but it wasn't just the wound that was driving him mad, something in his head. He felt like he was being tortured, he screamed in utter pain but he could hear nothing. Just feel the blood flood into his mouth as he began choking on it. His heart pumped blood threw his veins he tried reaching out but it was just even colder. Then, he felt something grab him. First it was just one but then there were many more, shadows began keeping him under. Was he going crazy? Shining threw the trees the sunlight came, he could see the shine on the dark red water but he could not get to it. The voices in his head were getting louder and his vision got darker. He seen something amongst the darkness, but now he wasn't awake. It was something he was being shown.

This vision had been embedded deep into his mind, he hadn't even known his heart had stopped beating for a moment there. That vision? He had already forgotten but deep within his self consious it rested to be one day revealed to him..just a moment there he thought he was done for. It was quiet on the outside, the surface of blood had grown calm. Yet he hadn't done all of this to die, well not entirely. Death is only the beguinning. Suddenly his arm rushed out from the surface. He grabbed the ground and pulled himself out, at first he could only hear his heart beguinning to beat again.

Yet as he thought about it, he had only herd his heart beating after he was out. He could barely see or hear when he had climbed out...the blood of others dripped off of him. Reborn, his past, a part of him was still down there, dead beneath the surface of blood. The man that had risen was something else, Jak was on his knees with his eyes shut, he took a few more breaths before he opened his eyes, now that he was out he understood what just happened. He didn't say anything for the moment, he thought about what he herd down there. The vision, he could not remember with reasoning.
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I've embraced the darkside..i can feel it. *He said in a quiet tone.* But i will still feel the weight of shackles holding me down until the day the one's who brought me down are destroyed once and for all..
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Post Fri Feb 17, 2012 11:40 am

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"those chains are still attached to even the best sith, it will be up to you how long they will burden you for. Come we are going to return to the academy you can shower rest, and begin training tomorrow,"
*he said to him as he allowed him some time to himself as he headed back to the shuttle and waited. he was very pleased with what he saw in this young man*
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Post Sat Feb 18, 2012 4:57 pm

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*He stood up with no regret on his mind and just an expression that reflected his thoughts. A cold look and he promised himself as he stood tall that he would make everyone he use to know wish that they had never of known Jak Enthral. The pain on their faces on the first day they encounter him as Sith would please him. From the kind and respective Jedi Knight hero to a menace hell bent on destroying the Jedi, there will be no mercy.*

*There was nothing more then that. Without saying nothing further he looked to the transport, made his way inside and stood within as he awaited to be transported to the Academy.*
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