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Post Sun Nov 15, 2009 6:40 pm

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*Taris was an urban planet in the Outer Rim Territories. Its ecumenopolis quickly developing over a century of prosperity, the planet suffered from massive overpopulation. Once a galactic nexus, Taris' importance declined with the introduction of improved trade routes, and the planet rapidly fell into decay. The remainder of the planet's history was wrought with civil disorder and social unrest. As it turned to industry as a means of compensation for its economic troubles, the oceans became polluted and eliminated the planet's main food source. Famine spread among the lower classes while the rich hoarded what few supplies remained. The resulting strife led to the Tarisian Civil War, the start of lasting prejudices between the Humanocentric Tarisian nobles and the largely alien poor. The city became segmented, and the lower classes were banned from living in the upper levels of Taris.

During the Mandalorian Wars, Taris served as a crucial rallying point for dissident Jedi who decided to fight against the invading Mandalorian Neo-Crusaders. As the lower classes were crushed beneath the rich, crime became rampant, and the Tarisian government did little in response. This caused a mining company that employed half of the planet's lower class, Lhosan Industries, to leave Taris. This millions of unemployed workers rioted against the government, kidnapping the planet's Senator in the Galactic Senate as well as the local constable. This caused the local Jedi to leave Taris as well, leaving Taris in a state of anarchy, as the war raged on around it.

By the time of the Jedi Civil War, order had been restored, but swoop gangs and crime still held sway over the Lower City. During the war, Taris was conquered by the Sith Empire, which quarantined the planet in an attempt to capture Jedi Bastila Shan. As the search continued fruitlessly, the Sith leader Darth Malak, ordered the bombardment of Taris, killing countless civilians. This act had huge political repercussions for the Sith and changed the tone of the rest of the war, showing Malak and the Sith's true colors, and their desire to achieve victory at any cost.

Over the next few millennia the planet managed to rebuild and recover from its devastation, though it never reached the extent of its former glory. Similar to other ecumenopoli like Coruscant and Nar Shaddaa, the upper levels were safe and secure, inhabited by the wealthy, the lower levels, frequently plagued by gang warfare, were inhabited by thugs and the poor.*



Loose Sith
Loose Jedi
Mandalorian's
Traveler's


All types of RP can be found on Taris many different stories are beginning to go all at once, u are free to start your own RP if u wish, Also if u would like to participate in an RP it is recommended that you PM the people already participating in it.


-Non-combatant personal storylines (e.g. romance or adventure)
-Non-combatant large storylines (planetary affairs such as business)
-Large battles, fleet or army

--The above are suggestions but it is my hope to get a very WIDE variety of RP going on, on Taris.


-If you need to write something OOC please make sure it is very brief and that it only is to make sure someone is understanding what you said in IC or if you want to make a comment on someone else's post.

-If you wish to curse or to write mature content you may do so, as long as you do not make cursing a habit (every other sentence) and if you wish to write mature content please contact the governor to make sure it is okay that you continue. Writer discretion is advised.



-Visiting writers always welcome
-Long term writers always welcome
-New players to the universe always welcome
-New players will receive answers to questions OOC as long as it is sent in a PM to keep the quality of RP on Taris as good as possible
-You will receive a welcome via PM if you wish to enter an RP that is already taking place on Taris.


--The Imperial alliance was founded here.
--The Imperial Remnant was formed here after the Imperial Alliance fell--Lord Raven was governor of this planet all through the life span of Galaxy 1.0 along with his long time friend Lord Ronin. They have never been defeated in any invasion brought here to this date.
--Taris has been the target of many attacks and different sorts of RP's that, for the most part have been very interesting. If you have any ideas for new RP, please contact the governor of the planet because we are always open to new ideas for newer better RP.


-Lord Raven (Ky'ran Tarkin)
-Lord Cygnus Madrigal Tarkin
-Lord Sarian Kofuri
-Helius Ordo
-Lord Vereor
-Lord Malum
-Lord Phantom
-Zuka Zammanee
-Lord Mortious
-Lord Ronin
-An tiarna dubh
-Warmaster Karr (Yuuzhan Vong)
-Tuang H'rel
-James Loyederas
-Lord Mantus
-Cryus Fett
-Raven Alora





-You may want to use a section to state any profession you are particularly interested in recruiting ie soldier, bar-owner etc.

--Taris most welcomes new soldiers, Sith, any force sensitives, Any type of RP'ers are welcome as long as they don't try to ruin anyone's fun. Taris has become a mostly uneventful planet, we are looking to change that NEW RP'ers NEEDED whether you wish to join the faction taris is currently involved in doesnt matter, it is not mandatory for you to do so.[/quote]




5 Sith/Darksider/Mandalorians (Generals)

45

1,000

10,000

50.000 (Self Proclaimed)


600
Laser cannons (4)
High capacity bomb bay (1)

1,000
Medium laser cannons (4)


3 (3 Placed in Taris' Capital)


3
Placed:
-Taris' Capital
-The Jedi Tower
-The Great Temple Of The Abyss



2-
Turbolaser batteries (50) (Each)
Proton torpedo launchers (24) (Each)
Tractor beam projectors (15) (Each)
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Post Mon Nov 16, 2009 7:02 am

Re: Update a Planet Guide Entry Here

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Post Tue Nov 17, 2009 2:41 am

Re: Update a Planet Guide Entry Here

original guide entry
Bonadan

-*Bonadan was chief port world of the Corporate Sector and the primary world in the Bonadan system. It was a strip-mined planet at the end of the Hydian Way.*


wookie: http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Bonadan

-IC Sympathy tends towards: All, that is not enemy of S.E.

-Type of RP and/or SL likely to be found:


Open RP: Follows all rules of Universe, visitors welcome
(We are try this way for now.)

-Specific Scenarios:

* Large battles, fleet or army
* Duels
* IC Training for the character
* Non-combatant personal storylines (e.g. romance or adventure)
* Non-combatant large storylines (planetary affairs such as business)


-What to expect as a new RP arrival wanting to write here, (you may add others if required):

Visiting writers welcome/long term writers weclome/don't mind either
New players to the Universe welcome/
New players will receive answers to questions ooc and RP training
To join the story here: just RP anywhere straight away/arrive IC in open space or open terrain/introduce yourself via PM/ (both are preferred but leadership isn't too strict on this)
You will not receive an official ooc welcome PM to the planet's RP via PM
Prefect to avoid OOC as possible, if you need to use OOC to settle disputes please go to OOC disputes. IF YOU MUST WRITE OOC PLEASE WRITE IT WITH IC!



-Subtechnology Enterprises is currently occupy this planet

- Interested in recruiting any rp writer who wants to rp with S.E. or Judicar Kantari personally. Please PM Judicar Kantari so that it can run smoother.




Bonadan

-*Bonadan was chief port world of the Corporate Sector and the primary world in the Bonadan system. It was a strip-mined planet at the end of the Hydian Way.*


wookie: http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Bonadan

Astrographical Information:
Region: Tingel Arm
Sector: Corporate
System: Bonadan
Suns: Bonadan
Orbital Position: 4
Moons: 2
Grid coordinates: s-3
Rotation period: 44 standard hours
Orbital period: 259 local days

Physical:
Class: Terrestrial
Diameter: 13,100 km
Climate: Polluted
Prinary terrain: Industrial centers and eroded wastes

Societal:
Native species: Tortapo
Immigrated species: duros, humans, hiitians, timbu, tiss'shar
Official language: Galactic Basic Standard
Government: Democratic
Population: 12 billion
- 63% humans
- 11% tiss'shar
- 8% hiitians
- 18% Other
Major imports: foodstuffs, technology, consumer goods, luxury items
Major exports: industrial goods, minerals
Affiliations:
- Subtechnology Enterprises
- C.U.F. (council of the unified force)


JvS Ruling Faction:
The Council of the Unified Force

IC Sympathy Towards
├óÔé¼┬ó Jedi
├óÔé¼┬ó Grey Jedi
├óÔé¼┬ó Neutrals
├óÔé¼┬ó Redeemed Sith

Type of RP you are most likely to find here.
├óÔé¼┬ó Open RP
├óÔé¼┬ó Spontaneous SL
├óÔé¼┬ó Planned SL
├óÔé¼┬ó Large battles, fleet or army
├óÔé¼┬ó IC Training for the character
├óÔé¼┬ó Non-combatant personal storylines
├óÔé¼┬ó Non-combatant large storylines
├óÔé¼┬ó Military Maneuvers and Training
We are willing to RP anything with a good story.

What to expect as a new RP arrival wanting to write here.
├óÔé¼┬ó Visiting writers and players welcome
├óÔé¼┬ó New players to the Universe welcome
├óÔé¼┬ó New players will receive answers to questions Via PM
├óÔé¼┬ó Random comedy and idiotic behavior

To join the RP here:
To enter RP post IC in orbit and WAIT for the official message from one of the Admirals in charge in order to join the RP.
If you are here to in an aggressive nature send a Pm to Lord X or another CUF Leader and give us at least 24 hours to write you back so it can be RPed properly.
You will receive an official welcome to the planet's RP
If you are a new player and want RP training or IC training for your character, let us know.

No OOC on boards!
PM or post to the IC DISPUTES thread.

Defense Forces:
Space-
├óÔé¼┬ó Protector Class Space Station x2 (Located at poles)
├óÔé¼┬ó Anti Matter Space Mines x144 (Drift Charts)
Ground-
├óÔé¼┬ó Supreme Class Vehicles 151- 300m
~ Unity Class Airship x 10
├óÔé¼┬ó 300 - Heavy class vehicles-15- 150m
~ Mobile Air Command Center x100
~ AT-AT x100
~ LAAT x100
├óÔé¼┬ó 600 - Medium class vehicles-10-15m
~ VTOL Attack Craft x300
~ Windu Class Assault Vehicle x300
├óÔé¼┬ó 1,000 - Light class veheicles-0-10m
~ BARC x 1000
├óÔé¼┬ó 50 NPC Generals
~ Knights of the Council (all equipped with the Jedi Body Glove and Wrist Unit. All Knights are Korunnai,) x50
├óÔé¼┬ó 1,000 - Commando Troops
~ ├óÔé¼┬ó Advanced Recon Commandos x1000 (uses modular weapons system and Anti~Matter Slugs and are all equipped with the Jedi Body Glove and Wrist Unit.)
├óÔé¼┬ó 10,000 - Elite Troops
~ Clone jet troopers x 1000
~ Clone paratroopers x 1000
~ Clone heavy troopers x1000
~ Clone heavy gunners x1000
~ Phase 3 Dark troopers x1000
├óÔé¼┬ó 50,000 - Standard Troops
~ Clone Troopers
*All troops unless otherwise stated are in phase 4 armor but with the coloring and markings of the clone war area.
**These forces are the Planet├óÔé¼Ôäós defenses, not the Role Players fleets or ground forces.


Our alignment is Jedi and grey Jedi, and will welcome any newcomers who follow the protocol outlined above. Antagonists are also welcome from an OOC perspective, but will recognize that IC we will be trying our best to bring justice them├óÔé¼┬ªsorry =)

- The Government is run by the Council of the Unified Force. Our goals are simply to improve Bonadan, (by upgrading IC the facilities and OOC getting people to RP properly.) and to bring peace to the universe. We are growing in numbers and our always looking for new members feel free to look up our user group.

Posting in proper English required or you will be ignored. Thank you.
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Post Wed Nov 18, 2009 8:01 am

Re: Update a Planet Guide Entry Here

Old Entry:

[quote="The Traveler's Guide":85az4o84]-Concord Dawn

http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Concord_Dawn

"Concord Dawn was an arid, sparsely populated world inhabited mainly by farmers. It was located in the Mid Rim."

-IC Sympathy tends towards: All, primarily Mandalorian

-type of RP you are most likely to find here:

duels and fight scenes
ic training for your char
long term pre-agreed RP
reactive RP or 'spur of the moment' RP

-What to expect as a new RP arrival wanting to write here:

All writers are welcome.
'Noob' players to the Universe welcome.
'Noob' players will receive answers to questions ooc and RP training - PM for detail
To join the story here: just RP anywhere straight away
You will NOT receive an official ooc welcome PM to the planet's RP via PM
ooc chat on the boards - NO - we prefer to PM

-Concord Dawn, albeit a Mandalorian planet, is not controlled or governed by the Mandalorian Empire. The locations are currently under the direct ownership of Clan Vhett (Clan Fett for those not in the know). It DOES however support the Empire in the supply of agricultural produce.

-Clan Vhett welcomes new members, providing a suitable backstory is supported for being present within this family clan. They are not openly recruiting.

-Point of interest: Fett Homestead (http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Fett_homestead)

-Clan Vhett: http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Clan_Fett[/quote:85az4o84]

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Updated Entry:

[size=150:85az4o84][color=#FF8000:85az4o84]Concord Dawn[/color:85az4o84][/size:85az4o84]

http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Concord_Dawn

"Concord Dawn was an arid, sparsely populated world inhabited mainly by farmers. It was located in the Mid Rim."

[color=#00FF00:85az4o84][u:85az4o84][b:85az4o84]IC Sympathy tends towards:[/b:85az4o84][/u:85az4o84][/color:85az4o84]

[list:85az4o84]
- All Mandalorians, regardless of faction affiliation
- Business partners, clients, or potential customers of the protective services of the Mandalorian Protectors
- All other characters are welcome to RP here, but will be treated IC as aruetii (non-Mando, outsiders) until an IC relationship has been established. (Note: This is not meant to discourage RPing OOC, just staying true to Mando culture IC.)
[/list:u:85az4o84]

[color=#00FF00:85az4o84][u:85az4o84][b:85az4o84]Type of RP likely to be found:[/b:85az4o84][/u:85az4o84][/color:85az4o84]

[list:85az4o84]
- Open RPing, especially of a Mandalorian nature
- Long-term and Short-term RPing both welcome
- Planned SLs are common
- Spontaneous RPing, so long as any attempts to harm another player's character are discussed via an OOC PM with the other player beforehand, is fine here. [i:85az4o84][color=#FF0000:85az4o84](We believe firmly in respect and collaboration OOC, and that any intent to harm another character IC should be first discussed privately between players OOC.)[/color:85az4o84][/i:85az4o84]
- Duels between characters are fine, so long as all parties concerned are ok with it OOC.
- Mandalorian cultural practices such as drinking and fighting are the norm here, as long as all conflicts remain IC and friendly relations maintained OOC.
- [i:85az4o84][u:85az4o84]Friendly[/u:85az4o84][/i:85az4o84] military-related exercises and RPing. (Hostile military RPing is allowed, but discussed below, and [url=http://jedivsith.com/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=11141:85az4o84]Banvon Tawr[/url:85az4o84] should be PMed beforehand.)
[/list:u:85az4o84]

[color=#00FF00:85az4o84][u:85az4o84][b:85az4o84]What to expect as a new RP arrival wanting to write here:[/b:85az4o84][/u:85az4o84][/color:85az4o84]

[list:85az4o84]
- All writers are welcome
- New players to the Universe are welcome
- New players will receive OOC answers to questions and RP training if PMed
- To join the story here: Arrive IC in [url=http://jedivsith.com/viewtopic.php?f=703&t=1209&st=0&sk=t&sd=a:85az4o84]Open Orbit[/url:85az4o84] or [url=http://jedivsith.com/viewtopic.php?f=704&t=1210&st=0&sk=t&sd=a:85az4o84]Open Terrain[/url:85az4o84] (depending on your storyline). Don't forget to read what's currently going on IC, so that you can adjust your SLs accordingly.
- We will try to welcome all new players to our boards OOC via PM, time permitting.
- Keep OOC chat on the boards to a bare minimum. Sometimes a comment or explanation happens, but discussions should be left to PMs and the Dispute thread.
- Mando'a is used here fairly frequently. Don't worry, no player is expected to have personal knowledge of the language, that is why we provide Mando'a references:
[list:85az4o84]
- http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Mando%27a
- http://karentraviss.com/html/documents/ ... pril09.xls (Excel Document)
[/list:u:85az4o84]
[/list:u:85az4o84]

[color=#00FF00:85az4o84][u:85az4o84][b:85az4o84]About Hostile Military RPing:[/b:85az4o84][/u:85az4o84][/color:85az4o84]

Competitive RPing is inevitable, and battles will happen here just as they do every other planet in JvS. Since we do not yet have a high enough rating, we will not dictate terms, but instead provide the following information to help players understand our RPing mindset and preferences in RPing battles here:

[list:85az4o84]
- OOC respect MUST come first and foremost. Namecalling and disrespect among players will be reported to the Whills. We might be Mandos IC, but we're all human beings OOC, and regardless of what happens, must relate to one another as players in such a manner.
- Also, OOC reasons for wanting to attack are not acceptable. OOC conflicts between players should not affect what happens IC. If two players on opposing sides IC have an OOC issue with one another, we ask that competitive RPing of any kind (duels or battles) be held off between the parties involved until the matter is settled. We will not allow OOC conflicts to ruin everyone else's IC RPing, it's childish, immature, and makes RPing a joke.
- Canon ships, and with only a few modifications at most, are much more respected here than heavily modified ships and player creations. JvS allows player-created ships and excessive modifications to canon ships, so we must accept them, and their actions will not be ignored, but when it comes to RPing damage done to our forces, they will not be as effective as canon ships with few modifications. It's nothing personal, we just believe that canon sources are much more true to SW - and JvS is a SW RPing site - than heavily modified ships and player creations are, and as such, we are willing to cooperate to an even higher degree with players who also have a similar respect for canon.
- Strategy is more important to us, and more highly respected, than who has the most ships or biggest guns. We RP Mandos, and firmly believe that with proper RPing and intelligent strategies, Davids can beat Goliaths, so don't rely solely on firepower and size, because we won't.
- Any conflicts with RPed actions should be dealt with first via PM with the player(s) concerned, then if unsettled, to this planet's "Disputes" thread. If the matter is minor, [url=http://jedivsith.com/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=11141:85az4o84]Banvon Tawr[/url:85az4o84] will be more than happy to help settle the matter OOC. He is fair and objective OOC, regardless of which side his character is fighting for IC at the time, and he personally has years of experience in SW RPing and in Moderation.
- We prefer an orderly and organized method of RPing battles, as character duels often are. As such, we ask that all players involved in a battle make their post, then wait until responses have been made before making another battle post. This might take longer, but it will be more fair to all, and the chances of missing someone else's post will be dramatically reduced.
- We ask that ANY infiltration attempts that would affect the planet's defenses first be discussed via OOC PM with [url=http://jedivsith.com/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=11141:85az4o84]Banvon Tawr[/url:85az4o84].
- Storylines and RL issues take precedence over competitive RPing. We may ask that the battle be delayed during busy times for us OOC. We would do the same for you as well.
- [url=http://jedivsith.com/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=11141:85az4o84]Banvon Tawr[/url:85az4o84] is considered the unofficial organizer of any battles that take place on the Concord Dawn boards. We ask that you consult him ahead of time via PM before deciding to start a battle here, so that details can be agreed upon and the timetable and other OOC details coordinated.
[/list:u:85az4o84]


[color=#00FF00:85az4o84][u:85az4o84][b:85az4o84]About Concord Dawn's political standing and the Controlling Faction:[/b:85az4o84][/u:85az4o84][/color:85az4o84]
[list:85az4o84]

- [url=http://jedivsith.com/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=11141:85az4o84]Banvon Tawr[/url:85az4o84] is the de facto leader of Concord Dawn. Any inquiries should be directed to him via PM.

- Concord Dawn, albeit a Mandalorian planet, is not controlled or governed by the Mandalorian Empire. The locations are currently under the direct ownership of the Mandalorian Protectors. It DOES however provide nominal support to the Empire as fellow Mandalorians.

- The [b:85az4o84]Mandalorian Protectors[/b:85az4o84] are a group of Mandalorians who are not interested in empire-building or politics, but in being true to Mandalorian culture, and putting a premium on family, comrades, and being warriors. They fight the wars of others, as Mandos traditionally have, and offer protective services to other planets for a fee. They do not have a traditional power structure of hierarchy, they are simply a group of comrades with a common cultural and commercial purpose. [url=http://jedivsith.com/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=11141:85az4o84]Banvon Tawr[/url:85az4o84] is considered the leader only in organizational issues and business matters, but claims no special privileges or asserts any extra authority over his fellow Mando'ade. They welcome any Mandalorians who wish to get back in touch with their roots and any players who would like to have a little fun RPing Mandos. The Mandalorian Protectors, while sharing a name with the canon group (http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Mandalorian_Protectors), do not restrict themselves to the Mandalore Sector as they did in canon, but offer protective services to anyone who has the credits and are deemed trustworthy enough to keep their word.


[/list:u:85az4o84]

[color=#00FF00:85az4o84][u:85az4o84][b:85az4o84]Points of Interest:[/b:85az4o84][/u:85az4o84][/color:85az4o84]

[list:85az4o84]
-[url=http://jedivsith.com/viewforum.php?f=941:85az4o84]Fett Homestead[/url:85az4o84] (http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Fett_homestead)
[list:85az4o84](The Fett Homestead, while under the de facto control of the Mandalorian Protectors, is still considered the home of Cassus Fett.)[/list:u:85az4o84]
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Post Mon Nov 23, 2009 2:17 am

Re: Update a Planet Guide Entry Here

Old Entry:

[quote="The Traveler's Guide":25izsgsu]-Concord Dawn

http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Concord_Dawn

"Concord Dawn was an arid, sparsely populated world inhabited mainly by farmers. Itj was located in the Mid Rim."

-IC Sympathy tends towards: All, primarily Mandalorian

-type of RP you are most likely to find here:

duels and fight scenes
ic training for your char
long term pre-agreed RP
reactive RP or 'spur of the moment' RP

-What to expect as a new RP arrival wanting to write here:

All writers are welcome.
'Noob' players to the Universe welcome.
'Noob' players will receive answers to questions ooc and RP training - PM for detail
To join the story here: just RP anywhere straight away
You will NOT receive an official ooc welcome PM to the planet's RP via PM
ooc chat on the boards - NO - we prefer to PM

-Concord Dawn, albeit a Mandalorian planet, is not controlled or governed by the Mandalorian Empire. The locations are currently under the direct ownership of Clan Vhett (Clan Fett for those not in the know). It DOES however support the Empire in the supply of agricultural produce.

-Clan Vhett welcomes new members, providing a suitable backstory is supported for being present within this family clan. They are not openly recruiting.

-Point of interest: Fett Homestead (http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Fett_homestead)

-Clan Vhett: http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Clan_Fett[/quote:25izsgsu]

Instructions: Delete the old entry and replace with the updated entry.



Updated Entry:

[size=150:25izsgsu][color=#FF8000:25izsgsu]Concord Dawn[/color:25izsgsu][/size:25izsgsu]

http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Concord_Dawn

"Concord Dawn was an arid, sparsely populated world inhabited mainly by farmers. It was located in the Mid Rim."

[color=#00FF00:25izsgsu][u:25izsgsu][b:25izsgsu]IC Sympathy tends towards:[/b:25izsgsu][/u:25izsgsu][/color:25izsgsu]

[list:25izsgsu]
- All Mandalorians, regardless of faction affiliation
- Business partners, clients, or potential customers of the protective services of the Mandalorian Protectors
- All other characters are welcome to RP here, but will be treated IC as aruetii (non-Mando, outsiders) until an IC relationship has been established. (Note: This is not meant to discourage RPing OOC, just staying true to Mando culture IC.)
[/list:u:25izsgsu]

[color=#00FF00:25izsgsu][u:25izsgsu][b:25izsgsu]Type of RP likely to be found:[/b:25izsgsu][/u:25izsgsu][/color:25izsgsu]

[list:25izsgsu]
- Open RPing, especially of a Mandalorian nature
- Long-term and Short-term RPing both welcome
- Planned SLs are common
- Spontaneous RPing, so long as any attempts to harm another player's character are discussed via an OOC PM with the other player beforehand, is fine here. [i:25izsgsu][color=#FF0000:25izsgsu](We believe firmly in respect and collaboration OOC, and that any intent to harm another character IC should be first discussed privately between players OOC.)[/color:25izsgsu][/i:25izsgsu]
- Duels between characters are fine, so long as all parties concerned are ok with it OOC.
- Mandalorian cultural practices such as drinking and fighting are the norm here, as long as all conflicts remain IC and friendly relations maintained OOC.
- [i:25izsgsu][u:25izsgsu]Friendly[/u:25izsgsu][/i:25izsgsu] military-related exercises and RPing. (Hostile military RPing is allowed, but discussed below, and [url=http://jedivsith.com/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=11141:25izsgsu]Banvon Tawr[/url:25izsgsu] should be PMed beforehand.)
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[color=#00FF00:25izsgsu][u:25izsgsu][b:25izsgsu]What to expect as a new RP arrival wanting to write here:[/b:25izsgsu][/u:25izsgsu][/color:25izsgsu]

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- All writers are welcome
- New players to the Universe are welcome
- New players will receive OOC answers to questions and RP training if PMed
- To join the story here: Arrive IC in [url=http://jedivsith.com/viewtopic.php?f=703&t=1209&st=0&sk=t&sd=a:25izsgsu]Open Orbit[/url:25izsgsu] or [url=http://jedivsith.com/viewtopic.php?f=704&t=1210&st=0&sk=t&sd=a:25izsgsu]Open Terrain[/url:25izsgsu] (depending on your storyline). Don't forget to read what's currently going on IC, so that you can adjust your SLs accordingly.
- We will try to welcome all new players to our boards OOC via PM, time permitting.
- Keep OOC chat on the boards to a bare minimum. Sometimes a comment or explanation happens, but discussions should be left to PMs and the Dispute thread.
- Mando'a is used here fairly frequently. Don't worry, no player is expected to have personal knowledge of the language, that is why we provide Mando'a references:
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- http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Mando%27a
- http://karentraviss.com/html/documents/ ... pril09.xls (Excel Document)
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[color=#00FF00:25izsgsu][u:25izsgsu][b:25izsgsu]About Hostile Military RPing:[/b:25izsgsu][/u:25izsgsu][/color:25izsgsu]

Competitive RPing is inevitable, and battles will happen here just as they do every other planet in JvS. Since we do not yet have a high enough rating, we will not dictate terms, but instead provide the following information to help players understand our RPing mindset and preferences in RPing battles here:

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- OOC respect MUST come first and foremost. Namecalling and disrespect among players will be reported to the Whills. We might be Mandos IC, but we're all human beings OOC, and regardless of what happens, must relate to one another as players in such a manner.
- Also, OOC reasons for wanting to attack are not acceptable. OOC conflicts between players should not affect what happens IC. If two players on opposing sides IC have an OOC issue with one another, we ask that competitive RPing of any kind (duels or battles) be held off between the parties involved until the matter is settled. We will not allow OOC conflicts to ruin everyone else's IC RPing, it's childish, immature, and makes RPing a pathetic joke.
- Canon ships, and with only a few modifications at most, are much more respected here than heavily modified ships and player creations. JvS allows player-created ships and excessive modifications to canon ships, so we must accept them, and their actions will not be ignored, but when it comes to RPing damage done to our forces, they will not be as effective as canon ships with few modifications. It's nothing personal, we just believe that canon sources are much more true to SW - and JvS is a SW RPing site - than heavily modified ships and player creations are, and as such, we are willing to cooperate to an even higher degree with players who also have a similar respect for canon.
- Strategy is more important to us, and more highly respected, than who has the most ships or biggest guns. We RP Mandos, and firmly believe that with proper RPing and intelligent strategies, Davids can beat Goliaths, so don't rely solely on firepower and size, because we won't.
- Any conflicts with RPed actions should be dealt with first via PM with the player(s) concerned, then if unsettled, to this planet's "Disputes" thread. If the matter is minor, [url=http://jedivsith.com/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=11141:25izsgsu]Banvon Tawr[/url:25izsgsu] will be more than happy to help settle the matter OOC. He is fair and objective OOC, regardless of which side his character is fighting for IC at the time, and he personally has years of experience in SW RPing and in Moderation.
- We prefer an orderly and organized method of RPing battles, as character duels often are. As such, we ask that all players involved in a battle make their post, then wait until responses have been made before making another battle post. This might take longer, but it will be more fair to all, and the chances of missing someone else's post will be dramatically reduced.
- We ask that ANY infiltration attempts that would affect the planet's defenses first be discussed via OOC PM with [url=http://jedivsith.com/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=11141:25izsgsu]Banvon Tawr[/url:25izsgsu].
- Storylines and RL issues take precedence over competitive RPing. We may ask that the battle be delayed during busy times for us OOC. We would do the same for you as well.
- [url=http://jedivsith.com/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=11141:25izsgsu]Banvon Tawr[/url:25izsgsu] is considered the unofficial organizer of any battles that take place on the Concord Dawn boards. We ask that you consult him ahead of time via PM before deciding to start a battle here, so that details can be agreed upon and the timetable and other OOC details coordinated.
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[color=#00FF00:25izsgsu][u:25izsgsu][b:25izsgsu]About Concord Dawn's political standing and the Controlling Faction:[/b:25izsgsu][/u:25izsgsu][/color:25izsgsu]
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- [url=http://jedivsith.com/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=11141:25izsgsu]Banvon Tawr[/url:25izsgsu] is the de facto leader of Concord Dawn. Any inquiries should be directed to him via PM.

- Concord Dawn, albeit a Mandalorian planet, is not controlled or governed by the Mandalorian Empire. The locations are currently under the direct ownership of the Mandalorian Protectors. It DOES however provide nominal support to the Empire as fellow Mandalorians.

- The [b:25izsgsu]Mandalorian Protectors[/b:25izsgsu] are a group of Mandalorians who are not interested in empire-building or politics, but in being true to Mandalorian culture, and putting a premium on family, comrades, and being warriors. They fight the wars of others, as Mandos traditionally have, and offer protective services to other planets for a fee. They do not have a traditional power structure of hierarchy, they are simply a group of comrades with a common cultural and commercial purpose. [url=http://jedivsith.com/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=11141:25izsgsu]Banvon Tawr[/url:25izsgsu] is considered the leader only in organizational issues and business matters, but claims no special privileges or asserts any extra authority over his fellow Mando'ade. They welcome any Mandalorians who wish to get back in touch with their roots and any players who would like to have a little fun RPing Mandos. The Mandalorian Protectors, while sharing a name with the canon group (http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Mandalorian_Protectors), do not restrict themselves to the Mandalore Sector as they did in canon, but offer protective services to anyone who has the credits and are deemed trustworthy enough to keep their word.


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[color=#00FF00:25izsgsu][u:25izsgsu][b:25izsgsu]Points of Interest:[/b:25izsgsu][/u:25izsgsu][/color:25izsgsu]

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- [url=http://jedivsith.com/viewforum.php?f=941:25izsgsu]Fett Homestead[/url:25izsgsu] (http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Fett_homestead)
[list:25izsgsu](The Fett Homestead remains and will always be the home of Cassus Fett.)[/list:u:25izsgsu]
- More locations to come soon...
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Bogden

*Bogden, also known as Bodgen, was a many-mooned world on the Inner Rim Territories, near the Hydian Way, between Arkania and Ploo. It was also along the Braxant Run.*

IC Sympathy tends towards Mandalorians, all welcome as long as you don't cause trouble

Type of RP and/or SL likely to be found:
Whatever RP style you like to follow, its welcome here

Type of RP you are most likely to find here:
Whatever comes this planet's way
war production
big battles
fights of all kinds

What to expect as a new RP arrival wanting to write here:
Everyone is welcome here.
New players to the Universe welcome.
New players will receive answers to questions ooc and RP training.
To join the story here: arrive IC in open space.
You will not receive an official ooc welcome PM to the planet's RP via PM.
OOC chat on the boards welcome.

Bogodon is now run by the Mandalorian Empire, specifically under Malice Hingang. Contact him for questions, or if you are here to kill him leave your name and a detailed message.
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*Mirial was the frigid, dry homeworld of the Mirialans, including Luminara Unduli and Barriss Offee. The Mirialans joined the galactic community prior to 3,951 BBY. The planet was however, eventually was taken over by the Trade Federation. [source?] Trade Federation oppression on the planet was fought by the hero Arwen Cohl in a failed attack against the Trade Federation. It turns out that it was a scheme by Palpatine to strength the Trade Federation. The planet was then aligned with the Confederacy of Independent Systems during the Clone Wars.*


Tau Empire members, Force Users, Mercenaries


Open RP: Encouraged
Closed RP: Please PM
Business RP: Encouraged
Space Battles: Please PM
Ground Battles: Please PM
IC Training: Not Encouraged
Adventure: Encouraged
Romance: Not Encouraged






50,000 Parabellum Industries Shock Troops (standard)
1,000 Parabellum Industries Armored Troops (elite)
30 AATs
10 Hailfire Droids
10 AT-PTs



-Closed RP-post on OOC board for permission
-Open RP-post in open orbit
-War RP-PM, post in OOC, or post in open orbit



There is essentially no TG info on this planet. This is what I would like to see for this planets TG entry. And this is just a quick-change job. When the planet is more properly under Tau Empire control I will probably update this TG again.
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Post Thu Dec 03, 2009 1:13 am

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Submitted to correct spelling and grammar mistakes and typos

Guide Entry (Current)
Bonadan

-*Bonadan was chief port world of the Corporate Sector and the primary world in the Bonadan system. It was a strip-mined planet at the end of the Hydian Way.*


wookie: http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Bonadan

Astrographical Information:
Region: Tingel Arm
Sector: Corporate
System: Bonadan
Suns: Bonadan
Orbital Position: 4
Moons: 2
Grid coordinates: s-3
Rotation period: 44 standard hours
Orbital period: 259 local days

Physical:
Class: Terrestrial
Diameter: 13,100 km
Climate: Polluted
Prinary terrain: Industrial centers and eroded wastes

Societal:
Native species: Tortapo
Immigrated species: duros, humans, hiitians, timbu, tiss'shar
Official language: Galactic Basic Standard
Government: Democratic
Population: 12 billion
- 63% humans
- 11% tiss'shar
- 8% hiitians
- 18% Other
Major imports: foodstuffs, technology, consumer goods, luxury items
Major exports: industrial goods, minerals
Affiliations:
- Subtechnology Enterprises
- C.U.F. (council of the unified force)


JvS Ruling Faction:
The Council of the Unified Force

IC Sympathy Towards
├óÔé¼┬ó Jedi
├óÔé¼┬ó Grey Jedi
├óÔé¼┬ó Neutrals
├óÔé¼┬ó Redeemed Sith

Type of RP you are most likely to find here.
├óÔé¼┬ó Open RP
├óÔé¼┬ó Spontaneous SL
├óÔé¼┬ó Planned SL
├óÔé¼┬ó Large battles, fleet or army
├óÔé¼┬ó IC Training for the character
├óÔé¼┬ó Non-combatant personal storylines
├óÔé¼┬ó Non-combatant large storylines
├óÔé¼┬ó Military Maneuvers and Training
We are willing to RP anything with a good story.

What to expect as a new RP arrival wanting to write here.
├óÔé¼┬ó Visiting writers and players welcome
├óÔé¼┬ó New players to the Universe welcome
├óÔé¼┬ó New players will receive answers to questions Via PM
├óÔé¼┬ó Random comedy and idiotic behavior

To join the RP here:
To enter RP post IC in orbit and WAIT for the official message from one of the Admirals in charge in order to join the RP.
If you are here to in an aggressive nature send a Pm to Lord X or another CUF Leader and give us at least 24 hours to write you back so it can be RPed properly.
You will receive an official welcome to the planet's RP
If you are a new player and want RP training or IC training for your character, let us know.

No OOC on boards!
PM or post to the IC DISPUTES thread.

Defense Forces:
Space-
├óÔé¼┬ó Protector Class Space Station x2 (Located at poles)
├óÔé¼┬ó Anti Matter Space Mines x144 (Drift Charts)
Ground-
├óÔé¼┬ó Supreme Class Vehicles 151- 300m
~ Unity Class Airship x 10
├óÔé¼┬ó 300 - Heavy class vehicles-15- 150m
~ Mobile Air Command Center x100
~ AT-AT x100
~ LAAT x100
├óÔé¼┬ó 600 - Medium class vehicles-10-15m
~ VTOL Attack Craft x300
~ Windu Class Assault Vehicle x300
├óÔé¼┬ó 1,000 - Light class veheicles-0-10m
~ BARC x 1000
├óÔé¼┬ó 50 NPC Generals
~ Knights of the Council (all equipped with the Jedi Body Glove and Wrist Unit. All Knights are Korunnai,) x50
├óÔé¼┬ó 1,000 - Commando Troops
~ ├óÔé¼┬ó Advanced Recon Commandos x1000 (uses modular weapons system and Anti~Matter Slugs and are all equipped with the Jedi Body Glove and Wrist Unit.)
├óÔé¼┬ó 10,000 - Elite Troops
~ Clone jet troopers x 1000
~ Clone paratroopers x 1000
~ Clone heavy troopers x1000
~ Clone heavy gunners x1000
~ Phase 3 Dark troopers x1000
├óÔé¼┬ó 50,000 - Standard Troops
~ Clone Troopers
*All troops unless otherwise stated are in phase 4 armor but with the coloring and markings of the clone war area.
**These forces are the Planet├óÔé¼Ôäós defenses, not the Role Players fleets or ground forces.


Our alignment is Jedi and grey Jedi, and will welcome any newcomers who follow the protocol outlined above. Antagonists are also welcome from an OOC perspective, but will recognize that IC we will be trying our best to bring justice them├óÔé¼┬ªsorry =)

- The Government is run by the Council of the Unified Force. Our goals are simply to improve Bonadan, (by upgrading IC the facilities and OOC getting people to RP properly.) and to bring peace to the universe. We are growing in numbers and our always looking for new members feel free to look up our user group.

Posting in proper English required or you will be ignored. Thank you.



Guide Entry (Corrected)
Bonadan

-*Bonadan was chief port world of the Corporate Sector and the primary world in the Bonadan system. It was a strip-mined planet at the end of the Hydian Way.*


wookie: http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Bonadan

Astrographical Information:
Region: Tingel Arm
Sector: Corporate
System: Bonadan
Suns: Bonadan
Orbital Position: 4
Moons: 2
Grid coordinates: s-3
Rotation period: 44 standard hours
Orbital period: 259 local days

Physical:
Class: Terrestrial
Diameter: 13,100 km
Climate: Polluted
Primary terrain: Industrial centers and eroded wastes

Societal:
Native species: Tortapo
Immigrated species: duros, humans, hiitians, timbu, tiss'shar
Official language: Galactic Basic Standard
Government: Democratic
Population: 12 billion
- 63% humans
- 11% tiss'shar
- 8% hiitians
- 18% Other
Major imports: foodstuffs, technology, consumer goods, luxury items
Major exports: industrial goods, minerals
Affiliations:
- Subtechnology Enterprises
- Kal Corp
- C.U.F. (council of the unified force)


JvS Ruling Faction:
The Council of the Unified Force

IC Sympathy Towards
├óÔé¼┬ó Jedi
├óÔé¼┬ó Grey Jedi
├óÔé¼┬ó Neutrals
├óÔé¼┬ó Redeemed Sith
├óÔé¼┬ó Businesses

Type of RP you are most likely to find here.
├óÔé¼┬ó Open RP
├óÔé¼┬ó Spontaneous SL
├óÔé¼┬ó Planned SL
├óÔé¼┬ó Large battles, fleet or army
├óÔé¼┬ó IC Training for the character
├óÔé¼┬ó Non-combatant personal storylines
├óÔé¼┬ó Non-combatant large storylines
├óÔé¼┬ó Military Maneuvers and Training
We are willing to RP anything with a good story.

What to expect as a new RP arrival wanting to write here.
├óÔé¼┬ó Visiting writers and players welcome
├óÔé¼┬ó New players to the Universe welcome
├óÔé¼┬ó New players will receive answers to questions Via PM
├óÔé¼┬ó Random comedy and idiotic behavior

To join the RP here:
To enter RP, post IC in orbit and WAIT for the official message from one of the Admirals in charge in order to join the RP.
If you are here in an aggressive nature, send a Pm to Lord X or another CUF Leader and give us at least 24 hours to write you back so it can be RPed properly.
You will receive an official welcome to the planet's RP
If you are a new player and want RP training or IC training for your character, let us know.

No OOC on boards!
PM or post to the DISPUTES thread.

Defense Forces:
Space-
├óÔé¼┬ó Protector Class Space Station x2 (Located at poles)
├óÔé¼┬ó Anti Matter Space Mines x144 (Drift Charts)
Ground-
├óÔé¼┬ó Supreme Class Vehicles 151- 300m
~ Unity Class Airship x 10
├óÔé¼┬ó 300 - Heavy class vehicles-15- 150m
~ Mobile Air Command Center x100
~ AT-AT x100
~ LAAT x100
├óÔé¼┬ó 600 - Medium class vehicles-10-15m
~ VTOL Attack Craft x300
~ Windu Class Assault Vehicle x300
├óÔé¼┬ó 1,000 - Light class veheicles-0-10m
~ BARC x 1000
├óÔé¼┬ó 50 NPC Generals
~ Knights of the Council (all equipped with the Jedi Body Glove and Wrist Unit. All Knights are Korunnai,) x50
├óÔé¼┬ó 1,000 - Commando Troops
~ ├óÔé¼┬ó Advanced Recon Commandos x1000 (uses modular weapons system and Anti~Matter Slugs and are all equipped with the Jedi Body Glove and Wrist Unit.)
├óÔé¼┬ó 10,000 - Elite Troops
~ Clone jet troopers x 1000
~ Clone paratroopers x 1000
~ Clone heavy troopers x1000
~ Clone heavy gunners x1000
~ Phase 3 Dark troopers x1000
├óÔé¼┬ó 50,000 - Standard Troops
~ Clone Troopers
*All troops unless otherwise stated are in phase 4 armor but with the coloring and markings of the clone war area.
**These forces are the Planet├óÔé¼Ôäós defenses, not the Role Players fleets or ground forces.


Our alignment is Jedi and Grey Jedi, and will welcome any newcomers who follow the protocol outlined above. Antagonists are also welcome from an OOC perspective, but need to recognize that IC we will be trying our best to bring them to justice├óÔé¼┬ªsorry =)

- The Government is run by the Council of the Unified Force. Our goals are simply to improve Bonadan, (by upgrading the facilities IC and getting people to RP properly OOC.) as well as to bring peace to the universe. We are growing in numbers and are always looking for new members, feel free to look up our user group.

Posting in proper English prefered. Thank you.
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Post Thu Dec 03, 2009 6:08 pm

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To update Adarlon's TG. and the following is the updated version Dec09:





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Adarlon is a planet located in the Outer Rim Territories in the Minos Cluster / Adarlon System. Being on the Rimma Trade Route, the area attracts a large amount of visitors which helped Adarlon grow into one of the galaxy's most prominent centres for tourism with a booming entertainment industry. It was here on Adarlon that the holographic medium was developed as an entertainment staple. Music from Adarlon is known as highly sophisticated: Adarlon is home to one of the most famous opera companies in the galaxy, and the famous opera singer Neile Janna. Our primary industry is centered on tourism, and our warm climate makes the various resorts and parks a favourite vacation getaway. Although mainly rugged and mountainous the planet offers breathtaking views from resorts built into the highest mountain peaks. With a breathable temperate climate and the intense scenery a healthy 20 million individuals currently make this planet their home. (as referenced in )



New Order of the Eye characters and Sith



Many visitors from a wide array of backgrounds. Some good, some bad. You will encounter different individuals from all over the galaxy and all walks of life and government affiliations as Adarlon is a popular tourist attraction. There are seedy types and wealthy types and they are all here to enjoy the surroundings and take part in the excitement of the best entertainment scene in the galaxy.

The rules here are pretty simple. There is a sizeable security team which will act in order to protect guests and owners. Please act respectfully. If any of our staff are threatened or attacked, security teams will arrive immediately. On the same hand, guests are expected to protect themselves as well. If your enemy is here, that is your problem to deal with and don't forget the moment you step into NOE occupied territory you are subject to our laws and penalties and same of which is subject to change without notice.

RP will generally involve but not be limited to the day to day involvement of DLT's roll with the NOE (New Order of the Eye) including Corporate Meetings and Events, DLT and her Nightsisters enjoying the profits of the booming entertainment business they manage here and the many DLT business ventures. DLT's Office Tower is located here and the day to day operations of the Glow Dome take place as well as the hustle and bustle of 20 million habitants.




Follows all rules of Universe / Business Inquires welcome at Platform 88 and GlowDome.



RP├óÔé¼Ôäós can be reactive here and not pre-planned provided they stick to the ideas in the storyline and this travel guide; spur of the moment accepted but again must follow the general SL of the travel guide.



Large Fleets Poised to Defend
Nightsisters
Entertainment and Tourism
Nightclub Glow Dome
Lavish Resorts

Non-combatant large storylines would include the general planetary affairs such as defences and orbital patrols, business gatherings and corporate functions for the NOE (New Order of the Eye), DLT and her witches and all their business ventures, operation of the resorts and the Glow Dome.



Welcome to join in. Please prepare your story line to include Hostile Sith and the fact that DLT has a "resistance is futile" attitude and will persuade you to join the NOE!!!!!!!!! You should be hounded while visiting any major city with electronic NOE advertisements. Everyone living here permanently eventually must agree to join the NOE however, DLT knows there are non-NOE among us and visitors are in abundance it is a tourist attraction.

We want you to have a good time. Visit the resorts and go to the Glow Dome, we won't bug you too much in there about anything. Feel free to mingle with the habitants on the surface and be prepared to endure the regular goings on of DLT and her witches who can be impulsive and invisible depending on their mood!!




Welcome to RP here but must follow travel guide. Beware of witches. Beware of many strangers from a many different backgrounds. Security is enforced but biased. READ THIS GUIDE THOROUGHLY!! Automatically respect NOE forces as it is their planet and they are powerful. You wouldn├óÔé¼Ôäót want to provoke any of them. BE NERVOUS HERE BUT HAVE FUN WHILE YOU ARE BEING NERVOUS. Can apply to DLT for training and or employment at the Glow Dome or if interested in more vigorous training and education the NOE can help. Must follow storyline as described in this Travel Guide.



No OOC talk please!! Refer to for OOC chat



Please arrive IC in open space without a fleet, one shuttle (up to 30 meter vessel) permitted to dock onto Platform 88. RP that you submitted to NOE bioscans and NOE security check points.

If an NOE officer is not there IC to greet you RP the fact that you have passed through at least one security check point (feel free to elaborate on this if you want i.e. you may have passed through more than one check point or encountered trouble getting through security with older codes or line ups or whatever). Once on Platform 88 and cleared for the surface, RP using the NOE Public Transport to the surface (which is quite lavish by the way and entertainment geared so RP that too!! i.e. your favourite bands played during the trip to the surface........LIVE!!). On the surface you can visit the major cities, The Glow Dome and Open Terrain.

While we are open to new or different RP ideas here and offer to review and consider new ideas, we ask that if you wish to waiver from this guide to PM the owner and wait for a reply. If you want a more involved RP with the NOE or any of its members, or want to get in on the general storyline of DLT and such, PM to discuss your ideas and we are most open to consider them at the NOE!!

If you currently work for DLT or are a member of the NOE, you automatically have clearance codes that allow you to use your own transportation to the surface if you wish.


You will not receive an official ooc welcome PM to the planet's RP via PM

OOC chat is not welcome on the boards and is completely unnecessary because you can use the OOC Dispute Forum on Adarlon which we prefer for OOC talk.

















and lots of other major NOE members including but not limited to:

, , , , , , , , , , .




We are always looking to employ in the positions of guards and security forces, Glow Dome employees required, bar staff, entertainment acts, all business inquiries welcome on Platform 88 or PM the creepy owner - Evil, smooth talkin DLT (Dark Lady Trace).

While visiting and even once you are gone - keep in mind a watchful EYE is kept on Adarlon - This is NOE territory!! Any hostilities towards this planet, its owners and habitants will be met with Swift and Brutal Action!!

A very popular nightclub known for its elaborate lighting and sound design in which dazzling illusions kept visitors pouring in. This establishment was known as "the bright center of Minos Cluster." Located on the planet Adarlon, in the city of Belrand etched into a mountainous cliff at the edge of the city, the Glow Dome was named for the intensely bright lights which spill into the sky above the building. The interior lighting is equally as bright, being populated with a variety of SenseLights, and the owners took no responsibility for injured retinas. The main building was an immense dome, situated atop a cliff overlooking the city. DLT's most recent addition is constructed over underground Rancor pits and will have clear floors so that guests can look down and admire the awesome pets while they party and includes a sunken dance floor lowering the guests closer to the pets but safe behind clear walls and floors.
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: DLT named the orbiting space station Platform 88 which seemed boring to most but it was meaningful mathematically and culturally to DLT. Platform 88 had a large central structure with greater capacity than that of other popular NOE designs. It incorporated a private hangar bay built underneath the central structure for NOE only visitors the interior of which was lavish with diamond crystal jewels and red velvet walls and consoles and huge cathedral ceilings to fit the ridiculously huge beasts who led the NOE. For the general public three radial docking platforms jetted out from the central structure each with hangar bays neatly tucked underneath. Unlike most space stations, Platform 88 was designed to incorporate future modifications including mobility and hyperspace-capabilities. Laden with security teams and devices bio scanners operate around the clock here intruding on everyone's privacy.
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Manaan was the second of three planets that orbited the star Pyrshak. It had no moons, and the entire surface of the planet was covered with water. Ahto City served as the capital of the planet, and was the only surface city and spaceport. Since it was the only settlement accessible to offworlders, the only method of transit to the true surface of the planet was through a submersible from Ahto City.

Canyons and rifts lined the ocean floor. At least one of the major rifts, the Hrakert Rift, had deposits of kolto, which was harvested as it drifted to the surface. The Hrakert Rift was also home to a giant firaxan shark known as the Progenitor and other, smaller sharks. Deep undersea caverns also served as homes to the native aquatic species, and the sentient Selkath built their cities, deep-sea pods, far beneath the surface. Much of the underwater area of Manaan was uncharted and unknown, even to the native Selkath.

http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Manaan

IC Sympathy Towards: Iron Fist Allies


Types of RP:
Duels and fighting.
Long-term pre-arranged.
IC training
Spur of the moment RPing
Drinking

What to expect as a new RP arrival wanting to write here:
All arrivals on the planet must request clearance via Open Orbit.
OOC Is NOT WELCOME on the boards, if it needs to be said, make it by PM.
New Players are Welcome, but MUST follow protocol, by Requesting Permission to land.

It is the home world of the Warriors of the Iron Fist and is dominated by the Dun na Manaan - Fortress of Manaan. The Vegemite Sith Enclave, Xendorian Guard and Dark Jedi Enclave members can often be found there.

Kolto production is currently controlled by the Warriors of the Iron Fist.

The following are well established planetary defenses they simply are not listed:

Manaan Planetary Defenses:

Orbital:
2 Gaerwn-class Space Station
R├â┬®alta an Bh├â┬íis ├óÔé¼ÔÇ£ Star of Death I. Major General Br├â┬¡d ├âÔÇ£ D├â┬║nlaing
R├â┬®alta an Bh├â┬íis ├óÔé¼ÔÇ£ Star of Death II. Major General C├â┬│n├â┬ín ├âÔÇ£ Dubhda

Surface:
Command Officers:
Field Marshal ├âÔÇ£ Fiannaidhe ├óÔé¼ÔÇ£ CO of IF Armed Forces
Chief Advisors:
General ├âÔÇ£ hUallaigh
General Mac Coise
Advisors:
Major General ├âÔÇ£ hUada
Major General Taoilinn
Major General ├âÔÇ£ S├â┬║ileabh├â┬íin
Major General Mac Suibhne

The probability of an invasion of Manaan is quite remote. As much as the aquatic environment of this planet make it difficult to defend it is far more imposing in terms of invasion. That noted ├âÔÇ£glaigh na Iarnd├â┬│ideanna ├óÔé¼ÔÇ£ Warriors of the Iron Fists deploys a massive military defense system to protect this territory.

The Defense system of Manaan consists of 6 levels.
1. 2 defense platform set with a self destruct mechanism as a last resort to attacks.

R├â┬®alta an Bh├â┬íis ├óÔé¼ÔÇ£ Star of Death I. Major General Br├â┬¡d ├âÔÇ£ D├â┬║nlaing
R├â┬®alta an Bh├â┬íis ├óÔé¼ÔÇ£ Star of Death II. Major General C├â┬│n├â┬ín ├âÔÇ£ Dubhda

Gaerwn-class Space Station
=Technical Specifications=
Length: 5 km
Width: 5 km
Height: 5 km
Hull: Titanium-reinforced durasteel
Armament: Triple-barreled mass-driver cannon(1)
Turbolaser batteries(155)
Heavy turbolasers(155)
Laser cannons(80)
Ion cannons(80)
Proton torpedo launchers(32)
Tractor beam projectors(24)
Gravity-well generators(4)
Speed: N/A
Description: Inspired by the Death Stars, the creators decided to make a defense platform that would rival all others. The 5 km in diameter sphere was built around the specially-designed triple-barreled MDC. The cannon was originally a traditional single-barreled design, but after much debate it was changed to the triple variant to remedy the slow rate of fire and reload rate. It pales in comparison to the superlasers of the real Death Stars, but it was designed to protect planets, not destroy them. The outer surface of the station is packed with hundreds of guns for optimal offensive and defensive capabilities and is protected by a pair of powerful shield generators (one per hemisphere), strong enough to withstand a direct hit from an Executor (though follow-up shots would definitely overload the shields). To protect against hit-and-run tactics each quadrant houses a powerful gravity-well generator though activating all 4 simultaneously drains the power core heavily and can only be maintained for at most 3 hours before the station reverts to its backup generators. The station also possesses several small hangars and even a modest repair facility on the side opposite the MDC. Unlike the actual Death Stars, the Caerwn possesses no hyperdrive or sublight engines for the same reason it lacks a superlaser. The station does however sport several large maneuvering jets to increase the firing arc of the MDC. To allow for lower crew numbers, every system in the entire station can be slave-linked to the main command structure in the center of the station, including the MDC and all other weapons.
* Mass cannon driver
Specs:
Vilocity: 6 km/s
Range: 250 km (with accuracy)
The cannon is 1 km long. The triple barreled design fires a slug per second from each barrel at a velocity that creates a 10 giagton impact. Accuracy is exceptional. Unlike conventional beam weaponry, these rounds are not affected by ray shields
Shields: Equipped
Complement: TIE fighter(24)
Lambda-class shuttle(1)
Crew: Full-time crew members(10,000)
Minimum crew members(2,950)
Gunners(1,790)
Passengers(26,400)
Consumables: 2 years
Cargo capacity: 25,000 tons
2. A varying number of fleets are deployed at Manaan at any given time. As a general rule the Faction flagship & personal fleets of An Tiarna Dubh is present.
They keep a constant vigil & conduct examination of incoming vessels.
At a state of war all but allied ships are allowed to pass by to the surface
3. The third level of defense is the Shutter Planetary Shields for increased defense around the Island City created by a network of beams that crisscross to create an impregnable wall. Any ships that pass through it will take heavy damage due to the energy, if not completely destroyed. The forcefield is run by a DSS-02 Shield Generator.
Run exclusively by IF engineers the shield is employed only as a defensive measure & does not impede movement in or out of Manaan.
OoC Manaan is not only open to free RP; it is encouraged.
Ahto City is run entirely on Hydro-electric power. A man-made river cuts through the middle of the island, and in the center, is a dam, used to harness the power of the currents that run through.
4. Four Garrison bases are located around Ahto City 1km inside the shield. One square km areas have been cleared for this purpose. These are fully manned & modified to match the oceantic environment of ManaanThese are fully manned & modified to match the oceantic environment of Manaan. The Garrison bases on Manaan are standard in most respects. They consist of eight levels, topped by a sensor and communications tower. Levels one through to five, all identical in size and shape, consist mainly of the large surface vehicle bays where all the surface vehicles are stored, maintained and deployed from. They also contain most of the personnel quarters as well as the armory, detention cells and most other key base areas. Level six hold the officer's quarters, TIE pilot├óÔé¼Ôäós quarters, command rooms and so on. Level seven consists entirely of the TIE fighter hangars. Level eight is the deployment chutes and control rooms for the base's TIEs. TIEs are launched, retrieved and manipulated by the base's powerful suite of tractor beam projectors. They also have underground sub-levels which contain the generators and main infrastructure.
Personnel
The Garrisons are commanded by a major general and house 1,720 base personnel and 1,280 combat troops, divided as follows:
300 command personnel
500 support/services personnel
200 technical personnel
200 science personnel
100 medical personnel
100 gunners/weapons technicians
80 AT├óÔé¼ÔÇ£ AT swimmer technicians
70 trade mission/diplomatic personnel
60 ground crew technicians
25 controllers
25 sensor technicians
10 ISP speeder technicians
50 Intelligence officers
Combat forces:
50 AT├óÔé¼ÔÇ£ AT swimmer crewers
800 Togorian marines
200 perimeter support troops (Togorian Marines)
150 base security/detention troops (Togorian Marines)
40 scout troopers (Togorian Marines)
Vehicle complement (modified for naval deployment)
20 AT├óÔé¼ÔÇ£ AT swimmer (replace standard AT-AT)
10 TIE Fighter Boat (replace AT-STs)
40 ISP speeder (replace scout speeder)
60 T- 47 swamp speeder (modified airspeeder- replacing landspeeders)
30 TIE fighters & 5 TIE bombers
100 miscellaneous vehicles (construction, cargo, maintenance, etc.)
Defenses
The Garrison base is equipped with three heavy twin turbolaser turrets and six heavy laser turrets, as well as tractor beam projectors. Though shielded, garrisons also possessed extensive ground defenses such as anti-infantry and anti-vehicle minefields and a ten-meter high electrified death fence. This has variable power settings, so it can either severely shock an individual or fry them outright in an instant, depending on the base commander's choice.
To get through the fence and into the base, units must pass through force field gates. These are flanked by 2 guard towers with stormtroopers on constant duty and positioned evenly around the fence's perimeter. Running behind the fence and parallel to it is an elevated catwalk patrolled by stormtroopers with guard towers (each equipped with electrobinoculars, floodlights, and alarm systems) spaced every 100 meters.
The garrison base was designed so that it could be positioned to use the terrain to their advantage. On Manaan these modifications were primarily of support vessels. The advanced air recyclers and advanced environment and filter systems standard in all Garrison bases are quite compatible with the topography of Manaan.
Steady surveillance of the waters of Manaan is maintained around the clock from these bases.
NOTE: The garrison bases are from the personal fleets of IF members:
An Tiarna Dubh
Garrison I. North
Major General James Connolly:
2nd Divisionn, Togorian Marines
8th Battalion Colonel Mac Uillaim
9th Battalion Colonel Mac Aastair
10th Battalion Colonel That
Si Uri Dubh
Garrison II. South
Major General:
2nd Division, 14th Army
1st Divison, 14th Army
8th Battalion, Colonel
9th Battalion, Colonel
10th Battalion, Colonel
Lamia
Garrison Base III. East
8th Battalion, Colonel
9th Battalion, Colonel
10th Battalion, Colonel
Randall Flagg
Garrison Base IV. West
3000 Troopers, 4th Army
8th Battalion, Colonel
9th Battalion, Colonel
10th Battalion, Colonel
* A small squadron of Wookie clones man Catarman over the Manaan surface (Wookie Garda Cosanta ├óÔé¼ÔÇ£ Wookie Coast Guard: 30 cloned Wookie Berserkers armed with ryyk blades & 30 shot rapid fire Bowcasters, man 15 Wookie catamarans. These troops are equivalent to Togorian Marines.)
5. There is only one place where you can invade and take the Planet that being Ahto City. Therefore, we know where you will be headed, and we will almost assuredly be mobilized before your forces are there. If someone were to actually somehow get past inspection, 600 Anti-air Artillery flak turrets: Multi-ordnance flak pods are installed and manned at the top of the major building in Ahto City (homing explosive flak pod are used as ammunition for AT-AAs. These are very effective against enemy aerial vehicles but nearly useless against ground targets.The hardware of the Garrison Bases more than compensate for this shortcoming.)
6. 1000 Garda R├â┬¡oga ├óÔé¼ÔÇ£ Royal Guard, all Togorian Highlanders, 4620 Togorian Marines & 30 Wookie clones maintain a constant military presence. These troops are housed at barracks throughout the city. They offer a speedy reply to any disturbance on the island.
Two Fenian Fire Regiments of 125 Togorian Marines handle white phosphorus mortars (WP), napalm-B napalm rocket launchers (FRL) & Flame throwers (FT). These troops remain in tight formation of companies in a wide spread. They work in 12 hour cycles ready for rapid deployment in minutes.
Armament: IF .303 Rifle w/ 10 clips
Dress: Full field helmet and full field aluminized clothing.
Regiment A.
Breakdown:
Major: Alpha Company 25; WP Mortar (20 Standard mortar /100 mm WP shell)
Major: Beta Company 25; Fire Bomb Rocket Launcher (FRL) (four-tube/66-mm RL w/ napalm-B rockets)
Major: Gamma Company 25; Napalm-B Flame throwers & 10 WP in grenades
Major: Delta Company 25; Napalm-B Flame throwers & 10 WP in grenades
Major: Epsilon Company 25; Napalm-B Flame throwers & 10 WP in grenades
Regiment B.
Breakdown:
Major: Alpha Company 25; WP Mortar (20 Standard mortar /100 mm WP shell)
Major: Beta Company 25; Fire Bomb Rocket Launcher (FRL) (four-tube/66-mm RL w/ napalm-B rockets)
Major: Gamma Company 25; Napalm-B Flame throwers & 10 WP in grenades
Major: Delta Company 25; Napalm-B Flame throwers & 10 WP in grenades
Major: Epsilon Company 25; Napalm-B Flame throwers & 10 WP in grenades
*As a standard the napalm is placed in 132 L drums of Napalm-B are readily available
In total, 9970 elite Togorian Marines (+ 30 Wookie clones) & 1000 commando Togorian Highlanders are stationed on Manaan as a planetary defense force.
*These troops are a planetary defense force & hence separate from the IF forces that man the Garrison bases, Dún na Manaan & IF HQ. Furthermore, any number of IF reinforcements may be deployed on Manaan as necessary. (4 Droideka Mark II used by Security Force are considered part of the Planetary Defense vehicle complement)
**6000 Togorian Marines are sationed at the Iron Fists HQ. (2000 under Major General Mac Suibhne of the Planetary Defense Force, The 13th army of Lamia & the 4th Army of Randall Flagg)
***At the end of each protruding arm of the colossal ├âÔÇ£glaigh na Iarnd├â┬│ideanna ├óÔé¼ÔÇ£ Warriors of the Iron Fists HQ a V-165 planetary turbolaser is positioned. Powerful enough to destroy an Imperial class Star Destroyer in a single volley this provides a formidable defensive measures. The platform it rests on, which was 150 meters in diameter, contained the defensive systems, as well as room for the crew of nearly 50 people and the 50 meter diameter reactor core, which generated enough power to allow the weapon to shoot once each 10 seconds. Effectively targets enemies through long-range sensors. Additional targeting information is provided by sensor arrays on orbiting satellites. This information is fed into the global processing network, which can in turn provide firing vectors for additional turbolasers. This system allows quick and efficient planetary defense. The V-165 combats overheating dangers by employing 48 overload dispersal tubes, which allow excess heat to be absorbed or redirected. They are defended by 4 meters of deep armor-plating and several deflector shield projectors & capable of turning a full 360 degrees and swinging in a 180 degree arc. The generators required to operate this hardware is readily supplied by exploiting the hydro electric power. These are operated by IF personnel.
****20 Anti-air Artillery flak turrets: Multi-ordnance flak pods stretch down each of the three wings of the IF HQ defense against aerial attacks.
*****The IF HQ is also guarded by Shutter Planetary Shields for increased defense created by a network of beams that crisscross to create a similar impregnable wall. The forcefield is run by a DSS-02 Shield Generator.
******Dún na Manaan has secondary shielding also provided by a DSS-02 Shield Generator.
*Pasca - An Gheat├â┬│ra ├óÔé¼ÔÇ£ The Gate-keeper: Handles security of Manaan in general & D├â┬║n na Manaan specifically. The 1000 Togorian Highland Commandoes of Randall Flagg├óÔé¼Ôäós 4th Army is deployed at D├â┬║n na Manaan. A 200 man Company led by a Colonel and his staffers assist at the Sequrity HQ/Reception Kiosk under Pasca. Coding is randomly changed at on a 6 hour cycle. The other four Togorian Highland Commando Platoons take up duty throughout the Fortress
SEE: Security Headquarters
In addition, to guard the ocean surface of Manaan a strong naval force is maintained by the planetary defense core:
Navy:
AT-AT swimmer: 100
AT-AT swimmer submarine: 200
1000 Shark underwater fighter
AT-AT swimmer:
The AT-AT swimmer has two modified heavy laser cannons much like its land counterpart. Its main body was broader than that of the AT-AT to accommodate the four additional repulsorlift engines that keep it afloat. These four repulsorlift engines produced a powerful field strong enough to repel any object on the craft's ventral section, but it could be penetrated by strong swimmers where it was non-existent.
Engine unit(s) 1 Primary thruster; 4 Auxiliary thrusters
Armament: 2 Modified heavy Laser cannons
2 Modified medium repeating blaster cannons
Crew: 5
Passengers: 40
AT-AT swimmer submarine:
This heavily modified version used by Darth Krayt is also employed. These vessels can operate underwater and have shields. It includes 6 laser cannons, including rear double laser cannon to stem rear assaults, and is fitted with a launch bay containing five Shark underwater fighters. The design is similar to the AT-AT swimmer, although sleeker. The command bridge has been replaced by another similar to an AT-AT's command bridge.
Crew: 5
Passengers: 40
Engine unit(s) 1 Primary thruster; 4 Auxiliary thrusters
Shielding
Armament:
5 Modified heavy Laser cannons (front)
1 double laser cannon (rear)
2 Modified medium repeating blaster cannons
Launch Bay:
5 Shark underwater fighter: The vessel was a one-man fighter for use in underwater environments. It had a design similar to the ancient Sith interceptor, with an additional tailfin, while the pilot's cockpit was similar to that of the TIE series fighters. The craft is armed with two laser cannons and has four thrusters, one primary located in the center of the rear fuselage
Engine unit(s) 1 Primary thruster; 3 Auxiliary thrusters
Armament: 2 Laser cannons
Crew: 1
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Contruum

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[url=http://jedivsith.com/viewtopic.php?p=231166#p231166:3maie8ax]Subject: Read this Planet's entry in the Traveler's Guide[/url:3maie8ax]

[quote="The Traveler's Guide":3maie8ax][size=150:3maie8ax][b:3maie8ax][color=#0000FF:3maie8ax]Contruum[/color:3maie8ax][/b:3maie8ax][/size:3maie8ax]

[narration:3maie8ax]*Contruum was regarded in some circles as one of the most preeminent planets outside the Core Worlds, comparable in power and prestige to Eriadu├óÔé¼ÔÇØand it was certainly the most prominent center in the area of the Mid Rim in which it lay. Located a short hyperspace jump from the Perlemian Trade Route, and two jumps from the Hydian Way, Contruum was known for its borium mines and foundries, and also for its shipyards.*[/narration:3maie8ax]

http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Contruum

[color=#00FF00:3maie8ax]Prominent Characters:[/color:3maie8ax]
[color=#FFFF00:3maie8ax]Lord Mortious[/color:3maie8ax]
Broon Krano
Charen Tyr
Maline Savo
Sierra Cabella

[color=#00FF00:3maie8ax]Current Major Storyline:[/color:3maie8ax]

Lord Mortious has disappeared along with the entire population of the planet, including his son, Broon Krano, the Governor of Contruum. Shortly after the disappearance Charen Tyr, Mortious' former apprentice, takes the Governor's chair under the order of Supreme Grand Moff Lord Cygnus Madrigal Tarkin of The Imperial Alliance. Newly crowned Governor Tyr begins to build Contruum's defenses and soon raises an army. But almost as fast as his reign began it was almost ended when his predecessor Broon Krano makes a mysterious return, with no memory and without the ability to control the Force. Upon regaining his connection to the force and being placed in charge of half the planet by Lord Cygnus himself, Broon still struggles to find his memory. Meanwhile, Charen Tyr has learned of the orders given by Lord Cygnus and in his lust for power, he is overtaken by a strange and powerful dark power of which no one knows its source. Lord Cygnus still grieving the loss of his beloved niece, Lady Deathstalker Lilandra Lyske, has made arrangement for her to be resurrected. Soon after the resurrection is complete, Lord Cygnus is called away and soon after Broon is sent with a young Twi' lek named Maline Savo to capture the Galaxies most dangerous creatures and bring them back for an unknown purpose. Shortly after their departure, the construction of the Grand Arena of Tyr begins. Now consumed by the Dark Power the evil Charen Tyr sets his eyes upon Anobis, the once beautiful home of the Emerald Order. In a courageous act Broon rushes in to save the planet from certain doom and squares off against the Governor himself. In the last moments of the battle Charen takes advantage of a slight distraction and delivers a near fatal blow to Broon. Now Broon, Maline, and a young boy named Johnny are at the mercy of the evil tyrant Charen, assisted by his new enforcer, the beautiful but deadly Sierra Cabella. Broon is locked away in a prison, Maline is running for her life, and poor Johnny is being held by the governor. Now their only hope lies with Lord Mortious. When will he return? What is the dark power that consumes Charen? And what will become of our heroes?

[color=#40FF00:3maie8ax]-IC Sympathy tends towards:[/color:3maie8ax] Contruum is a neutral planet and they are sympathetic toward all characters despite species, gender, force alignment, or allegiance.

[color=#00FF00:3maie8ax]-types of RP you are most likely to find here:[/color:3maie8ax] All RP's are accepted and will gladly be aided in development including but not limited to:

big space/fleet/troops battle based stories
duels and fight scenes
IC training for your character
long term pre-agreed RP
reactive RP or 'spur of the moment' RP
other as necessary

[color=#00FF00:3maie8ax]-A note for new arrivals:[/color:3maie8ax] All that we ask is that you [b:3maie8ax]DO NOT[/b:3maie8ax] post OOC on the boards, please use the designated forum and/or a PM for that.

Visiting writers and long term writers welcome
New players to the Universe are very welcome
New players will receive answers to questions OOC via PM and RP training
We accept all character classes and all careers

[color=#00FF00:3maie8ax]To join the story here:[/color:3maie8ax] arrive IC in open space or new characters may start RP in open terrain
You will receive an official OOC welcome PM to the planet's RP via PM


[color=#00FF00:3maie8ax]-Locations:[/color:3maie8ax]
Contruum Temple: The home of Lord Mortious and center of Government for Contruum.

House of Lyske: Former Governor, Lilandra Lyske, home.

Open Terrain: Open Terrain includes an Arena, a Factory, an Academy, and various other outposts[/quote:3maie8ax]


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[url=http://jedivsith.com/viewtopic.php?p=231166#p231166:3maie8ax]Subject: Read this Planet's entry in the Traveler's Guide[/url:3maie8ax]

[quote="The Traveler's Guide":3maie8ax] [size=150:3maie8ax][b:3maie8ax][color=#0000FF:3maie8ax]Contruum[/color:3maie8ax][/b:3maie8ax][/size:3maie8ax]

[narration:3maie8ax]*Contruum was regarded in some circles as one of the most preeminent planets outside the Core Worlds, comparable in power and prestige to Eriadu├óÔé¼ÔÇØand it was certainly the most prominent center in the area of the Mid Rim in which it lay. Located a short hyperspace jump from the Perlemian Trade Route, and two jumps from the Hydian Way, Contruum was known for its borium mines and foundries, and also for its shipyards.*[/narration:3maie8ax]

http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Contruum

[color=#00FF00:3maie8ax]Prominent Characters:[/color:3maie8ax]
[color=#FFFF00:3maie8ax]Lord Mortious[/color:3maie8ax]
Broon Krano
Charen Tyr
Sierra Cabella

[color=#40FF00:3maie8ax]-IC Sympathy tends towards:[/color:3maie8ax] Contruum is a neutral planet and they are sympathetic toward all characters despite species, gender, force alignment, or allegiance.

[color=#00FF00:3maie8ax]-types of RP you are most likely to find here:[/color:3maie8ax] We prefer to have more personal one on one RP├óÔé¼Ôäós that are story driven, however all RP's are accepted and will gladly be aided in development including but not limited to:

duels and fight scenes
IC training for your character
long term pre-agreed RP
reactive RP or 'spur of the moment' RP
We will also do big space/fleet/troops battle based stories but they are much less preferred.

[color=#00FF00:3maie8ax]-A note for new arrivals:[/color:3maie8ax] All that we ask is that you [b:3maie8ax]DO NOT[/b:3maie8ax] post OOC on the boards, please use the designated forum and/or a PM for that.

Visiting writers and long term writers welcome
New players to the Universe are very welcome
New players will receive answers to questions OOC via PM and RP training
We accept all character classes and all careers

[color=#00FF00:3maie8ax]To join the story here:[/color:3maie8ax] We would like to politely ask that you arrive IC in open space or new characters may start RP in open terrain
You will receive an official OOC welcome PM to the planet's RP via PM

[color=#FF0000:3maie8ax][b:3maie8ax]ATTENTION[/b:3maie8ax][/color:3maie8ax]: If you are planning to invade please contact Lord Mortious, Broon Krano, Charen Tyr, or Sierra Cabella at least 24 hours in advance before arriving.

[color=#00FF00:3maie8ax]-Locations:[/color:3maie8ax]
Contruum Temple: The home of Lord Mortious and center of Government for Contruum.

House of Lyske: Former Governor, Lilandra Lyske, home. Now is a pile of rubble.

Open Terrain: Open Terrain includes an Arena, a Factory, an Academy, and various other outposts[/quote:3maie8ax]
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Post Wed Dec 09, 2009 6:23 pm

Re: Update a Planet Guide Entry Here

Old Entry: viewtopic.php?f=145&t=4979

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http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Gamorr

OOC: (Image of Gamorr please)*

IC Sympathy: Gamorr is under the control of the Kingodm of Gamorr (KoG). The Kingdom prefers to be left alone in matters of galactic affiars. However, any new settlers who wish to join the Kingdom are welcome.

In addition to the KoG, two other factions make base here. The Feral Gamorreans are led by the "Warboss" an egnamatic Gamorrean. To that effect he is always looking for additional Gamorrean Tribes to pledge allegiance to him.

The Demon Lord has decided to make a base on Gamorr. He does not require anyone at this time.


Type of RP Found: Currently the planet is hosting essentially a Black Traffic light. The planet is not important enough in galactic affairs to matter, so the RP'ers here are taking time to devolop a RP which establishes the three major factions on the planet, their backgrounds, and their histories.

However, barring the end of that RP, the planet should be open to all types of RP, as long as you respect the current history.


Alterations: At this point in time, the RP'ers of Gamorr have no alterations in mind.

What to Expect: The Kingdom of Gamorr has a single patrolling vessel in orbit. They are very protective, so they will attempt to intercept you.

The Demon Lord has a small battle fleet. He is very protective and if provoked will fire first rather than ask questions.

If for some reason the Feral Gamorreans opperatted a starship, they would probably ram you by accident.

However, if you come as a settler or in peace, we will provide a full escort down to KoG controlled territory, in an attempt to avoid local trouble.
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Post Fri Dec 11, 2009 3:58 pm

Re: Update a Planet Guide Entry Here



"Sump was the humid, impoverished homeworld of the Nuknog, located in a seldom visited part of the Outer Rim Territories."


IC Sympathy tends towards: Sith, Dark Jedi, Mando, Droids

Type of RP you are most likely to find here:
Business Transactions
Duels and fight scenes are discouraged but allowed.
Long term pre-agreed RP
Reactive RP or 'spur of the moment' RP
Character Development RP

What to expect as a new RP arrival wanting to write here:
-The main writer here is Mortale, although several members of The New Order of the Eye pop in from time to time. New writers are welcome, we are trying to achieve the highest level of RP possible, more RPers are a welcome addition.

-Visiting writers welcome, we have several facilities to accommodate you for a short stay.

-New players to the Universe welcome.
--Players with credits will be preferred. This is a business world.

-New players will not receive answers to questions ooc. They will receive answers to PM questions.

To join the story here:
-If you wish to simply make a business transaction: Arrive IC in open orbit, request to land/conduct business. Then WAIT for IC permission to enter controlled space.
If you are looking for a more in-depth SL: PM Mortale with your SL ideas, once you hash out the details arrive IC in open orbit, request permission to land or conduct business and WAIT for IC permission to enter controlled space.

-Visitors will receive an official ooc welcome PM to the planet's RP via PM

-We prefer to PM instead of OOC Chatting, OOC Posting is PROHIBITED (meaning ABSOLUTELY NO OOC POSTING, if you post OOC you WILL be asked to leave the RP. ONE warning will be given via PM, if you do not cease to post OOC you will be ignored and your RP will be treated as null and void.



This is a business world, and as such we feature several establishments in order to serve you better.

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DeathTech Industries-
- For all your NOE Patented production.

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Sump Mining Capitol-
- The best in refined and raw ore, metals and alloys

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Sump Drive Yards-
-For the latest and greatest in DeathTech space vessels

Hyrotii Corporation-
-Also known as Hyrotii Engineering or Hyrotii Vehicle Works, manufacturer of starships and repulsorcraft.

Speizoc Arms-
-Producer of several types of military technology, including the Speizoc Arms C-136 "Grandfather Gun", the Speizoc g-2000, and the v-188 Penetrator.

-This planet is currently under the control of the New Order of the Eye. Darth Mortale acts as planetary ruler. Several restoration projects have been undertaken and resulted in a renewed planet, Sump is no longer an abandoned wasteland but rather a well-maintained mining colony. Due to the business status of Sump: Permanent residence is limited to Mortale, his men and any other members of the NOE.
Please enjoy your stay, we hope it will be profitable.


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ORBITAL DEFENSES
2
One placed in orbit above the North pole and the other the South.


GROUND EMPLACEMENTS
3
(located around the Sump Garrison Building)

2
Located over the Sump Garrison Building [DeathTech Industries, Sump Mining Capitol], and Sith Temple.

SUMP├óÔé¼ÔäóS PLANETARY FORCES
(Can NOT leave the planet)
* 300 Heavy Vehicles*
- 100
- 100
- 100

* 600 Medium Vehicles*
- 200
- 200
- 200

* 1,000 Light Vehicles*
- 150
- 350
- 500

* 50 NPC Generals*
-All wear Red NSA Armor with a white stripe painted down the center of their helmets to denote being a general

* 1,000 Commando Troops*

- 500
- 300
- 200

* 5,000 Elite Troops*
- 2,000
- 2,000 Dark Trooper (Phase III)
- 1,000 Pzobian Heavy Legionnaires

* 50,000 Standard Troops*
- 20,000 Stormtroopers
- 10,000 Troopers
- 10,000 Scout Trooper
- 10,000 Imperial Shocktrooper
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